Review of the Paper draft by Confirmed Biased:
Opening quote from Johannessen gives a solid start, but straight after the quote it gets more difficult to follow. The bullet points are not self-explanatory:
-We are all living in bubbles online and offline:
-Definition of a bubble
-Online bubbles are starting to influence us more
These bullet points could be explained in more detail to give the reader a solid understanding.
Problem itself: Well introduced problem, even though the terminology is somewhat difficult, i.e, the algorithm-imposed confirmation bias or the frontal lobes of the myriad quanta of the issue at hand. Could the more or less difficult concepts be translated into general purpose language?
Different perspectives of the societal problem are again not so easy to understand:
Psychology and individual behaviour
-Selection bias
But what does and doesn’t this Selection bias mean?
To finalise the report we encourage Confirmed biased to open their concepts and introduce them in a more understandable way. So far the draft consist of only text, but some relevant pictures would support the message. The solution provided could be visualised and its attractiveness could be evaluated by gathering user data. To prove the concept, we highly recommend to create a narrative-style video, which explains the problem and the solution with concrete examples. Background information are very relevant and supports the theory of the problem, but not the solution. Might there be also research on the proposed solution? Does unknown profiles really matter?